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Lindsay
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0 posted 2004-05-29 11:14 PM



The scars are healing, on my wrist and on my heart
I never thought I’d get a second change, and have a fresh start
But I’ve made it, through the tears and the pain
I now can see my struggle was not in vain
I’ve gotten my life turned around
I now have a smile where there once was a frown
And I owe it all to you
You’re the one who made me laugh when I was feeling blue
You were always there for me
When I needed you by my side you’d be
I hope that one day I can repay you
And be there for you too

© Copyright 2004 Lindsay Strube - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-05-29 11:42 PM


If this is a true experience, I have to say that I'm glad you got your life back on track.  Good luck!
Great poem...i loved it...

~Alli~

tapper798
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2 posted 2004-05-30 04:32 PM


that's a really good poem! It made alot of sense to me and I really got the point...good job and I too hope that isn't from life experience! Good job.

"If ever you think of me out of the blue, just remember it's all the kisses I've blown in the air finally catching up with you!"
  *~Erin~*

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3 posted 2004-05-30 09:18 PM


I've been there before...very well written, I'm sorry to hear about your pain but I'm glad you have finally been able to start healing. I hope everything turns out well for you.
~Live and Laugh~


The memories are worth the pain when the happiness is outweighs the sorrow
~Bella~

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