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sweet_cute_palestinian04
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since 2004-04-11
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0 posted 2004-05-26 01:39 AM



Guilty OF loVE.
Guilty of lies,

Standing in the wind,
Crying,knowing im wrong,

People say ,love is never guilty,
I broke him up in peices of cells,

But i had no choice,Im sorry ,and im so
guilty,

One more chance ,can it be?
or is it impossible to believe?

Guilty of leaving you and leaving your dreams,
Guilty of making you love me ,Guilty for making you wanting me,

But is there a chance,i shall repair the blame?
and give you what i have?

JUst wishing in between these tornados of blame and depressions ,

Like they alwayz say once a cheater always a cheater,

but i never cheated you ,but i just had to leave you ,isthere a way for me to make it up to you..

GUILTY I SHALL be and  guilty i shall remain...

I hate the world because it does'nt have a taste, i HATE the world because it does'nt have a color.!!
you cant change my mind.,..

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Fleur
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since 2004-04-09
Posts 103

1 posted 2004-05-26 06:02 AM


I know excatly what you mean. The situation is familiar to me. But I haven't been in such a situation yet, and I thank God for that. I don't know what to say about this, I guess that's our destiny.

- Great poem. Loves..
-Fleur-

*Alli4000*
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2 posted 2004-05-26 06:25 PM


yea....I can really relate to this too. nice job!

~Alli~

Rommance_Touch
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since 2004-05-07
Posts 97

3 posted 2004-05-26 09:30 PM


Really, nice one, but why u let him love u, why not escapped away,,,,u did something couldnt be reparied,,,,its just an aweful hurt


ITS MURDER

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