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Fleur
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since 2004-04-09
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0 posted 2004-05-25 01:01 PM


- It's not that good, but still I wanted to share it with you guys -


What is love?

I hear so much about betrayal,
so much about fake love,
and unhappy couples,
that I don't know the reality of love (anymore).

I hear love songs all the time,
couples around me; in a row,
kisses and sweet words coming out,
is this the thing they call love?

On TV; they discuss the meaning of love,
rescpect, honesty and trust; that's what they call,
in real life no one follows this,
so tell me; what is love actually?

I see good looking guys around me,
I get interested and try to look like a beauty,
but everytime I've ended up lonely,
so tell me; how do I find the love, honestly?

The day you find the one; you'll feel the love, they say,
but why can't they explain the feeling,
what is so special about love?
Tell me; when will I find the right one?

© Copyright 2004 Fleur - All Rights Reserved
Stepharoo
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since 2004-05-04
Posts 149
Washington, USA
1 posted 2004-05-25 07:16 PM


I like it...and not to worry, the one will come.
Keep it up!

sweet_cute_palestinian04
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since 2004-04-11
Posts 418
Earth
2 posted 2004-05-25 07:17 PM


hey sis

well,, first of all you dont need a man to make you happy,,these days you dont find love it finds you,,espcially when you need it...i cant lie to you and tell you love is the ugliest thing in life or i cant tell you that love is the best thing ,, i agree with you we need it some day ,but  i see love as a human being its not perfect and never will be...,, espcially for us and you know what i mean sis.... just dont fall ur trust and family's trust believe in urself like i said before,,yes i know some people you have spoke with have told you that  love is everything but i dont agree ,,i believe if you have love but no fmily,,love is nothing ] .....just be something you really want ..not for people but for urself...thats all i can tell you..

love yea sis.
take care\

peace

I hate the world because it does'nt have a taste, i HATE the world because it does'nt have a color.!!
you cant change my mind.,..

aussie teen
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since 2003-09-27
Posts 396
Australia
3 posted 2004-05-26 04:38 AM


this is an xcelent poem.....
love cant be described because its different for everyone..... it is something that just happens.... dont ever give up on it though because we all need to love something  ( no i dont mean some one ) different people love different things, some of my friends love music, some love bowling, some love collecing animal figurines..... like i said love is different for everyone..... let it come to you, dont go searching for it.... you will find it when you least expect it.
Keep up the writing.
Mel

so this is me but what do you care about that????
i am who i am. no one can change that but me, even then it will be a fight to the death

Fleur
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since 2004-04-09
Posts 103

4 posted 2004-05-26 05:55 AM


Thank you all for your advices and good words. It's just that sometimes I wonder what love really is, cause I give so much love and get so little again.

-Thank you sis, Love ya so much.

All of your words made me so happy. Thanks again.
Love and Hugz to ya'll!!

Rommance_Touch
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since 2004-05-07
Posts 97

5 posted 2004-05-27 05:58 PM


Hi, Fleur, missing you ....... I saw that sweet_cute_palestinian04 didnt speak abt the love but She just talked abt the Relation bet love and family, i think she face a prb abt that...Wheter TEEN said a love isnt a describation, u maybe not be able to describe it cuz u havent felt it yet....Anyway,,,,the love is a so simple and complex word in the same, its a wondefull mixing of feelings-->Caring, Love, Heart beeting, Trust, Respect, Honest, and un limited of Nobel words...and can say that it is Understand it, Feel it, Touch it, Say it

i hope u got me

Hope 4 u a nice life and wounderful guy,,,yr a sweet girl

~~~Romance_Touch~~~
  ~~Not_Ended~~

zenny
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since 2002-11-24
Posts 371
Belgium
6 posted 2004-05-31 01:07 PM


"When do you know you love someone?": a question many ask
but finding out the answer's the most difficult of tasks
It's just a heartfelt feeling which will surely cross your life
And when you feel and know it's there, you know the depth of life!

For me it's just the waking up and kiss him into morn
But also the huge missing, apart my heart it torns!
Yet that's too soon forgotten when I lay inside his arms
I'll keep this short and will just say I fell for all his charms!

I do know you will find this feel, yet time is still unknown
And when you will, the times of waiting are bygone!
Don't rush these things, be sure love's there for you
Make sure you share this feel with one who loves you, too

Hugs, kelly.


Fleur
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since 2004-04-09
Posts 103

7 posted 2004-06-01 06:12 AM


I'm sure it will Kelly. After I red your lil poem here, I start smiling, you expressed it so... kinda wonderful and lovely. Thanks Kelly....
cherrys_rule
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since 2006-03-18
Posts 442

8 posted 2006-05-21 02:22 PM


I really like this. it reminds me of one of my friends. She's always asking me that questin, What is love. I can't really tell her, because you can't really explain love. It's just there.
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