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Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

0 posted 2004-05-24 10:27 PM

v.1 tonight the sky looks darker than ever
like the stars are hiding from my view
i'm lying under them, wondering
if maybe your missing me too

i can't think of a more perfect person
to give a piece of my heart
just give me your word that you'll never break me
or tear us apart

ch. you'll have to make me a promise
that you can keep
with words like forever
the two of us will be
i never want you to make me cry
promise you won't make me shed a tear
just look in my eyes
say you'll always be here

v.2 i want you to be here with me
to comfort me on these lonely nights
hold me close to you
make everything be alright

ch.

no matter what i'll always love you
i swear

tapper798
Member

since 2003-07-20

Posts 353
My own world

1 posted 2004-05-24 10:36 PM

Wow I really liked this. Very good, I love the way you described how you want his promise to mean something. I liked it alot, bood job!@

"If ever you think of me out of the blue, just remember it's all the kisses I've blown in the air finally catching up with you!"
*~Erin~*

sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

2 posted 2004-05-24 11:30 PM

wowow amazinggg.keep it upp..love and respectt

I hate the world because it does'nt have a taste, i HATE the world because it does'nt have a color.!!
you cant change my mind.,..

Stepharoo
Member

since 2004-05-04

Posts 149
Washington, USA

3 posted 2004-05-25 03:11 PM

Very sweet! I like it a lot. Great Work!

Fleur
Member

since 2004-04-09

Posts 103

4 posted 2004-05-26 06:10 AM

I think it's sweet. Kinda romantic

Loved it...!

- Fleur -

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

5 posted 2004-05-27 05:29 PM

thank you all

no matter what i'll always love you
i swear

zenny
Member

since 2002-11-24

Posts 371
Belgium

6 posted 2004-05-31 01:28 PM

Very nice, i can hear it allready

aussie teen
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 396
Australia

7 posted 2004-06-02 05:08 AM

this is beautiful......
i love the emotion and i can definitly hear this one on the radio some time.....
keep it up...
Mel

so this is me but what do you care about that????
i am who i am. no one can change that but me, even then it will be a fight to the death

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