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Teen Poetry #7

Not the One?

Cinderelly
Member

since 2001-12-31

Posts 189
NM, USA

0 posted 2004-05-23 02:34 AM

Frustration,
tell me that you care,
say that you’ll be there.

VAGUE

kisses in my driveway,
the words that were said,
it’s not all in my head.

LIAR

laid back?
No, you hold back.
What is it that you’re afraid of?

VULNERABLE

shutting me out
calling you out.

PERSISTENT

wrong either way,
stuck in this stupid game you play.

REPEAT

friendship
friendship
friendship
tired of the word,
not what I want but what I need.

UNDERSTAND ME

Stepharoo
Member

since 2004-05-04

Posts 149
Washington, USA

1 posted 2004-05-23 12:00 PM

I like it a lot, I dont know what it is about this poem, but I really really like it.
Keep up the great work!

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