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Teen Poetry #7

I love you my dear!

Fleur
Member

since 2004-04-09

Posts 103

0 posted 2004-05-22 12:20 PM

I love you!

Everytime I close my eyes,
I see your pretty eyes,
That made my heart melt,
The day you came along and said;
Things which touched me indeed,
Made me feel secure and pretty,
At then I knew you were the one;
Who could save me and bring me;
Higher than the clouds above,
Give me the love and talk;
That I needed to become a part;
Of your world and heart;
Which gave me the strenght;
To say the magical words;
I love you my dear.

It's just something which came from my heart - I wrote it down. It's a bit confusing, but I kinda liked it, myself.

Hope you liked it!

Stepharoo
Member

since 2004-05-04

Posts 149
Washington, USA

1 posted 2004-05-22 12:35 PM

I think its very cute! Great job!
Keep it Up!

Fleur
Member

since 2004-04-09

Posts 103

2 posted 2004-05-22 12:41 PM

Thank you, for your comments. I really appreciate this!!

Rommance_Touch
Member

since 2004-05-07

Posts 97

3 posted 2004-05-22 12:56 PM

Hi, How r u, Fleur, so nice poem....
its so simple so touching
i love it
hope this love end by marrying

sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

4 posted 2004-05-22 01:56 PM

wowow...amazzing i love it sisis..kkeeep writtingggggggggggggggggg love and respect

I will cover you with my blood,not only because
i love you but because your are the one that turned my blood a color....

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