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sweet_cute_palestinian04
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since 2004-04-11
Posts 418
Earth

0 posted 2004-05-20 07:12 PM



How could you do this to me?,
How could you say you love me ?

Did'nt you say im like your sister and you will never cheat me?

I feel like dying,
I will give you anything just take it,,if you love him ,,too bad for me..

i dont want to hurt you ,,but i wish he accpets you , and you know its better for me and you,,.

Just go ,,i trusted you with so much and in the end your telling me you love him,,..


and what really kills me the most is when you lied at the both of us...

what is it ?
just tell me,what is it that made you lie?

i lost everything and now you have everything,
i seriously dont mind ,if you love him soo much just go with him.,,

But please dont come back begging me to forgive you,when i saw the look on your face ,i was about to die

because i knew you loved him and you wanted  to tell me sooner,,

but you told me soo late,,i really dont mind  but lying to me?,,lying to him?,,,,this is not the way to get someone you love


        YOU faild the both of us, me and him by cheating soo much,,,,

if you only told me sooner rather than later,..

what do you want me to say?,,

forgive you?
i cant ,im sorry, sis..

               my trust will never be repaired not even the day i die...


I will cover you with my blood,not only because
i love you but because your are the one that turned my blood a color....

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Stepharoo
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since 2004-05-04
Posts 149
Washington, USA
1 posted 2004-05-20 07:41 PM


Wow I can realy feel the emotion pouring outta this one...I hope all is well for you!
Great Poem...
keep it up!

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