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Teen Poetry #7

A B LACK HEART

Rommance_Touch
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since 2004-05-07

Posts 97

0 posted 2004-05-20 01:16 PM

Note: i prefered to write this poem by the black font, cuz its a dark poem

someday, a black day
i met a a black heart girl via a communication method
she get my attention easy, she's so lovely, so funny, so respectfull
at the time i felt, i care about her
i was so honest...i'm a sensitive, romance, love the beauty, beside ofcourse her pretty soul and character
is this wrong?? ofcourse not, she answered
i'm a guy love a pretty girls, so i wanna my wife be that pretty
dont cheat her after i get marry, im looking for the future
i was so simple, and stupid guy in the same time, i asked
are you pretty girl??
she answered..yes, i am
at this time, i released my feelings, with no limit
my feelings are just flying became out control
she shared me these feelings, my heart became pumping
she said i love you, my mind explosive of glad
a smile drew on my body carrying her name
it was a simple love
a trust was just from one side of me
after a days passed, the mask fall of her face
and the cheat heart, awake up
the wild face become clear
just she said, it was a game
im not a princess, im a sand of hell
she killed me, and went to fly to hurt other heart
~Watch Out, She's Arround~

Stepharoo
Member

since 2004-05-04

Posts 149
Washington, USA

1 posted 2004-05-20 07:54 PM

Hey, I'm not sure what to say about this poem. I had to read it a few times to get what you were trying to say. I can sense a lot of hurt. I liked it, keep up the good work!

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