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sweet_cute_palestinian04
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since 2004-04-11
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Earth

0 posted 2004-05-19 07:28 PM



Dayz pasted and time just went by so fast,
i told you ,i cant ever hold on to you,

I did not lie because i wantd to hurt you ,
but i lied for many reasons,,

But my love to you was real,
and my hope  was soo true,

I lied because i cant trust anyone in this damn life, i cant trust you or love you when i never met you in real life,..

This is life,and we both know we cant ever agree with it,

IM sorry but you dont know me and i dont know you,

i gave you the chance but i discovered that you think love has to have a beauty,

                  I MEAN
what if i dont have a beauty,?
what if i dont have  the style?
what if i dont have what you want ?

i dont have blonde hair, im not white im not black im not american im not anything but a human being,

Im sorry but hey i hope you would find the best in your life,,

PLEASE try so ,
i want to see you happy and i want to feel that im not the blame,,,

          " WELL this is all i wanna say "

I will cover you with my blood,not only because
i love you but because your are the one that turned my blood a color....

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tapper798
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since 2003-07-20
Posts 353
My own world
1 posted 2004-05-19 10:20 PM


Wow, I know exactly what you mean! I hate how guys just go for the "perfect" looking people...but good write, I can really relate and I'm sorry that you have to go through this pain.  Again, good job!

"If ever you think of me out of the blue, just remember it's all the kisses I've blown in the air finally catching up with you!"
  *~Erin~*

Stepharoo
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since 2004-05-04
Posts 149
Washington, USA
2 posted 2004-05-19 10:44 PM


I honestly dont know what to say about this one...
Keep up the good work,
I like your poem.

sweet_cute_palestinian04
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since 2004-04-11
Posts 418
Earth
3 posted 2004-05-19 11:01 PM


ohhh  thank u soo much my sises i appreicate it love and respect,,,peace

I will cover you with my blood,not only because
i love you but because your are the one that turned my blood a color....

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