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0 posted 2004-05-19 06:35 PM


sorry: this poem is large but i think its nice, i made it of it parts cuz, not allowed to write a long poems. thx 4 yr patient.


-Part One-
ooh baby, will i be beside u
while we both walk beside each other
and our legs touch the sand is whispering it
its a soft of leg
wich dont know to how to hurt,but know how to sense
will the sand hear yr soft walk on it
and say oh my allah, save me of it
oh my allah, she is killing me with her soft leg
no no no no
she will hold some of it in her hand
i cant bear that
her leg and her hand, i feel that
she the romance queen of earth
save me, i wanna love her, but i cant
her kinight is beside, hes is awefull
and a romance one beside a two bodies of a romance feelings walk
on my and i touch it
two bodies i like them
we are fighting and call them to come her and walk on till reach the beach, and the night is down,  
and moon is comming
  i raised her up
she just look at my eyes, speechless
put her hands on my shoulder
warm me so much
my heart pumping so hard
cant bear this love
she ask me give her a huge
and a kiss may come
i dont feel how that happened,but i liked it
he did, and kissed her a killer kiss
she became like a baby, put her head on the shoulder of him, looked at the sea, recruit her sweet poem
it was sadness poem, but i liked it
she was going to tearing like a breezing of the night fall
i cant bear over that
she owned me, dont know how,but she done
she is my Queen
who i will never left
the moon complain and cried and i said im here
my queen was overpower its ligh
wich yield of her face so much
a moon become like a slave for here
asking her a kiss
a moon was afriad to spell a words of "kiss"


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Rommance_Touch
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1 posted 2004-05-19 06:50 PM



-Part Two-
her knight was beside, and will never left
no chance to do, or way to have
a moon go away, afriad of her knight
the lovers just go into the tent
what happened, a nature asking on demand
my lover had a so red face
maybe a  generations will yield
and they will recruit what happened in between them
and the sun come on, while they were  they get out of the tent
still on the beach
the sun was warm and come to be on
but its warm was useless
was there a warm bigger between them
a warm of a love
did u hear about it
a warm of a love
did u hear about it
it will not understand, it just supply a warm with no sense
a lover still on the beach
~~~i love u~~~

Note: this poem, has been write as my heart asked me to do, and not face to anyone. i currently have an empty heart....

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