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Love is just a dream.!!
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Love is just a dream.!! |
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sweet_cute_palestinian04 Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 418Earth |
I wrote this now after watching my one year show and in the end its just a dream,,,i feel like crying i swear i wasted my time watching it and in the end its just a dream!!!.. .................................... Love is just a dream, Love is just a dream that will never be real.. Love is just a feeling inside that we need but overtime it just becomes clear... Love is just a touch that touchs our minds and hearts and makes us forgetwhat the rules are.. Love is just a dream i call out for help, its love but never real, I wish its real so atleast i can feel something real in life rather than being me!!.. ........................................ I will cover you with my blood,not only because |
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tapper798 Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 353My own world |
Wow, powerful, I fully got the message. I don't exactly agree with it, I think sometimes we'd like to think love is just a dream but I believe it is so much more, you just have to find the right person. Still, I liked it, very good write! Keep it up, I love your poems! "If ever you think of me out of the blue, just remember it's all the kisses I've blown in the air finally catching up with you!" |
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zenny Member
since 2002-11-24
Posts 371Belgium |
My dear, you're wrong! (don't kill me for this!) I feel a love that's real and true and know it once will find you too Love just has it's special ways but at the end it brightens your days! A great write! I enjoy reading your stuff  Hugs, kelly |
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