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Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 86

0 posted 2004-05-16 10:47 PM

It's a night like this
Where I could just lay down and cry
Letting the tears roll from my eyes
There's no certain reason
or story to be told
It's just this same old feeling
Deep inside my soul

Nothing excites me anymore
And Life is blah.
Everythings falling apart
I want you even more.
Things that used to be my everything
Now have no allure.

Loneliness is evil.
Love is vain.
How can I be happy?
When you're driving me insane.

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sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

1 posted 2004-05-16 10:49 PM

wow,wow ...this is the most cutest poem i have read from u ,,it honestly sounds gr88 keep it upp im saving it...love and respect sis..

peace

I will cover you with my blood,not only because
i love you but because your are the one that turned my blood a color....

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

2 posted 2004-05-17 04:08 PM

I can relate to this poem sooo much!
You described the feeling perfectly.
Great job,thanks for sharing.

W.W.
We were meant to live for so much more have we lost ourselves?
Maybe redemption has stories to tell maybe forgiveness is right where you fell.

Cinderelly
Member

since 2001-12-31

Posts 189
NM, USA

3 posted 2004-05-17 06:56 PM

I really liked this one . . . I'm totally adding it to my library.

Life is a moderately good play w/ a badly written thrid act. - Unknown

yankees01rugby
Junior Member

since 2003-08-13

Posts 48
USA

4 posted 2004-05-17 07:05 PM

i liked this one alot...you expressed the feelings exactly how i feel!

"What your mind believes, your body will achieve. Its time to start believing."

blackandwhitehorizon
Member

since 2003-05-05

Posts 183
an akward state of mind

5 posted 2004-05-18 08:31 PM

I really like this

"love is but a song we sing and fear's the way we die"

blackandwhitehorizon
Member

since 2003-05-05

Posts 183
an akward state of mind

6 posted 2004-05-18 08:34 PM

I really like this

"love is but a song we sing and fear's the way we die"

Riley

Senior Member

since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

7 posted 2004-05-20 07:30 AM

that was me last night....thanks for that...it was perfect...
riley

no matter what i'll always love you
i swear

Stepharoo
Member

since 2004-05-04

Posts 149
Washington, USA

8 posted 2004-05-20 01:39 PM

Very good!!! I like it a lot.
Keep it up.

Rommance_Touch
Member

since 2004-05-07

Posts 97

9 posted 2004-05-20 01:42 PM

So gr8 poem, you described the lonely feelings, and how u need for yr lover beside at this time

so simple, so touch, and sensed

~~Romance_Touch~~
~Not_End~

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