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sweet_cute_palestinian04
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0 posted 2004-05-14 09:12 PM



WHY NOt stop war?
why not stop the pain and hate?

Is it hard to get along?
Is it hard to be a real human being?

We are teaching our kids hate.
We are teaching our kids nothing but pain..

Why not live in a green land full of color?
Is it hard to get peace?

why dont you both stop ?
Iraq,israel,Palestine,AMerica??--- AND ALL...


lets stop and letS get along?
we are made the same kind,we are made from the same mom and dad...

why are we fighting over land?
is it worth the tears and pain and death of innoccent?

Is it worth to loose your family and friends??

Lets gets along ,im not saying be muslims but lets live as friends in life...

No more killing ,no more hating ,no more tears please all im asking for is lets be human beings..

How are we going to teach our kids the right when we dont even know what peace is??

How are we going to teach our kids love when there is fighting in this world?

KILLING is that a way to bring peace?
IS that a way to be loved??

being races????


     LETS STOP PLEASE.


ALL IM ASKING FOR IS PLEASE..



I will do anything ,not to hurt you, who ever hurts you ,is my enemy until i die...
I DONT AGREE WITH LOVE ever in my life.But dont ask me why..

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1 posted 2004-05-15 09:58 AM


Every single thing you said in this poem I agreed with. This poem was amazing....

~Alli~

yankees01rugby
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2 posted 2004-05-15 10:14 AM


I agree with you on most everything you said in the poem. good job!

"What your mind believes, your body will achieve. Its time to start believing."

Fleur
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3 posted 2004-05-15 12:47 PM


Very touching... I agree with you.. We need peace in this world!
tapper798
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4 posted 2004-05-15 04:40 PM


I really liked this one. Obviously many people do too! lol well keep it up, really good job!

"If ever you think of me out of the blue, just remember it's all the kisses I've blown in the air finally catching up with you!"
  *~Erin~*

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5 posted 2004-05-15 09:14 PM


"all we are saying is give peace a chance..."

indeed.

I'd like to say though, we all need to be more cautious of things we set in motion.

It's easier not to start, than it is to "un-do."

Hugs you.

This was refreshing for me today.

sweet_cute_palestinian04
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6 posted 2004-05-15 10:41 PM


THANKS ALL ,,,I TRULY APPREICATE IT...love and respect....


peace

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