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sweet_cute_palestinian04
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0 posted 2004-05-14 08:17 PM




If only there was a machine we can create to make us smile from our hearts.

If only there was amachine that can make us laugh from our heart.

If only this machine can make us intellegent when we are stupid.

If only this machine can make us enjoy life when were bored...

If only this machine can turn love only when we are old enough..

If only this machine can make us skip hate and just rememeber to love ,love..

If only this machine can make us forget the world and move on..

If only this machine can make us dream of something really sweet...

If only this machine can make us die and come back whenever we want ..

If only this machine can make us look at our seleves and appriecate  what we have...


If only this machine can make us never depressed or hate life....

DONT YOU THINK life would be the best thing of all??
I wish i was here but at the same time never existed...

i wonder if only life can give us one chanceand turn us back to where we never made mistakes,not even imagined of dying....


BUT!!! ITS TOOO LATE NOW....

but thats my dream ...
i wish someday life becomes more sweet...


I will do anything ,not to hurt you, who ever hurts you ,is my enemy until i die...
I DONT AGREE WITH LOVE ever in my life.But dont ask me why..


[This message has been edited by sweet_cute_palestinian04 (05-14-2004 08:57 PM).]

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tapper798
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1 posted 2004-05-14 08:47 PM


This was good, alittle predictable but still good.  I understand what you mean, wouldn't it be great if we could just take all the bitterness and harshness out of life? Sometimes I say yes and sometimes I say no. If we didn't have the harshness, we wouldn't appriciate the greatness of life. Anyways, good write, I really enjoyed it, I'm sure many can relate!

"If ever you think of me out of the blue, just remember it's all the kisses I've blown in the air finally catching up with you!"
  *~Erin~*

*Alli4000*
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2 posted 2004-05-15 09:56 AM


Wow. I sure wish I had a machine like this.

~Alli~

SwEeTnSeXy18
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3 posted 2004-06-28 05:49 PM


I would be right beside you buying my own machine trust me. I agree without the bad you wouldnt appricate the good but at the same time life would be a lot easier with something like this to help us out!

~in order to gain, you have to lose~


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