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tapper798
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My own world

0 posted 2004-05-14 06:21 PM


What has this world come to,
what have we become?
Cheaters, liers, people of
which there is no sum.

People today have
no morals in life,
They do what they can
so that only they can survive.

I look over at people
notice them cheating off me,
How can they do this,
why can't they see?

Our world today is so
fake and so unreal,
it's lost it's truth,
it's lost it's appeal.

There's a lack of
decent people now,
now that we've lost all respect
or just forgotten how.

This world is full of
so much darkness,
people who don't believe
who's faith is so much less.


I'm not saying I'm perfect,
that I'm not to blame,
for everyone has had a part
with how the world became.

-Erin

This is a poem on how the world is just so full of lies and cheating, I noticed it today when taking a test and it just really upset me.Hope you like it and let me know what you think!

"If ever you think of me out of the blue, just remember it's all the kisses I've blown in the air finally catching up with you!"
  *~Erin~*

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1 posted 2004-05-14 11:43 PM


Much Enjoyed! I agree, sometimes there seems like there is no hope for society.

I'm not saying I'm perfect,
that I'm not to blame,
for everyone has had a part
with how the world became.

Def. Enjoyed that part the most.
Keep it up!!

sweet_cute_palestinian04
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Earth
2 posted 2004-05-14 11:56 PM


wowwowowow...awesome enjoyed it keep it upp..


I will cover you with my blood,not only because
i love you but because your are the one that turned my blood a color....

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3 posted 2004-05-15 10:00 AM


I agree with both of the replys. GREAT JOB!!!
Fleur
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4 posted 2004-05-15 12:50 PM


I agree with you Erin. Loved your poem!! Great job!
tapper798
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since 2003-07-20
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My own world
5 posted 2004-05-15 06:57 PM


Wow thanks you guys! I'm glad you liked it. Sorry if it was kind of venting!

"If ever you think of me out of the blue, just remember it's all the kisses I've blown in the air finally catching up with you!"
  *~Erin~*

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