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sweet_cute_palestinian04
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since 2004-04-11
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0 posted 2004-05-12 04:55 PM




Walking down the hall,
screaming so loud,
just for someone to hear me breathe.

i gave you a chance to love me but you just threw it away,.

i truly loved you soo much,thats why im denying every guy...

i hate the world and espcially myself,
i hate the world and the people who never understand.,,,

i dont love you much now,,

you made me smile, YOU made me laugh, made me love the world and espcially myself but

why now?
whY leave me now?

im alwayz going to stay in this feeling of death until i die,

dying with you or without you iTS no differnce now,,

the world is running, the people are jumping ,and
im justcryingg ,,,,


i taste water when im with you , i tasted love when i was by you, but now i taste nothing but pain ,..


THAT IM SURE I CANT EVER REPAIR...

so dont blame me if i keep waiting again....thats love and thats my life ,,

THATS THE ONLY THING I CAN CONTROL..!!





I will do anything ,not to hurt you, who ever hurts you ,is my enemy until i die...

I DONT AGREE WITH LOVE ever in my life.But dont ask me why..

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Stepharoo
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since 2004-05-04
Posts 149
Washington, USA
1 posted 2004-05-13 05:32 PM


Uhm, this has very sad emotions comming out.
Well at least thats the way it seems to me.
Great Poem.

kissa~rachelle
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since 2003-11-27
Posts 988
nowhere special
2 posted 2004-05-13 09:44 PM


dido with steph... I could totally feel this..

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

sweet_cute_palestinian04
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3 posted 2004-05-13 10:33 PM


lolol......yea sis ..we are all going through alott and i guess we just have to fight the problems and live life normally as possible....

love and respect

I will do anything ,not to hurt you, who ever hurts you ,is my enemy until i die...
I DONT AGREE WITH LOVE ever in my life.But dont ask me why..

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4 posted 2004-05-13 11:30 PM


yes you can, and yes you will.....

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Destinys_Fallen_Angel
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5 posted 2004-05-14 12:17 PM


great poem i really enjoyed it...this was an excellent poem

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Fleur
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6 posted 2004-05-14 02:09 AM


Oh, sis.. That's so sad. Very touching. Loves... Fleur
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