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Petey Junior Member
since 2002-12-16
Posts 27Idaho, USA |
Goddess You cause men to write a thousand songs. To me, your approach is more attention catching Than ten thousand gongs. Your mist soft face, That could melt the hearts Of the whole human race. Your lustrous smile Could light the darkest caves, And could shine for miles. Hair softer than the softest snow But is the purest brown. Your brown eyes are darker than The furthest reach of space, But have a familiar grace That steals the breath of every man. Your simple elegance And immortal beauty Engender my insignificance. But I can still hope, I still might have a chance, A chance with a goddess, A dream too impossible to come true... I want to hope you just might Let a mortal like me sit with you. © 2004 Matthew Peterson This poem caused a lot of trouble for me. It came of wanting to let this girl know how I feel, but then I got shot from both ends, some saying I should do it, some saying I shouldn't. It's all one big mess and I've still got something burning inside of me. Those who live by the sword, get shot by those who don't. |
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Rommance_Touch Member
since 2004-05-07
Posts 97 |
Soooooooooo Wonderfull....Keep figthing 4 yr love but in a good way....without hurt other or yrself.... hope it done ~~~Rommnace_Touch~~~ ~~Not_Ended~~ ~~G_w_5~~ |
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sparrow139 Junior Member
since 2004-05-13
Posts 18UK |
Wow, you obviously hold this girl in very high esteem. Great poem and description, and good luck! [sparrow] |
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