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sweet_cute_palestinian04
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since 2004-04-11
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0 posted 2004-05-11 09:27 PM



why is it when i look in your eyes ,i feel that something is missing..

why is it when i think of you i feel something is just not there for me to feel?

why is it when i miss you ,i feel like i cant ever deal with people around me ,

wHY is it when i dream of you ,i cant ever see you in the morning or atleast at night when i am wake just thinking of you..

WHY are'nt you ever here to hear me speak and hear me cry and laugh?

why are'nt you here never in good and bad?

i loved you so much ,
i felt like i had no one to trust,
but your smile that kept me alive,

when i just count to five,
here you are just listening but same time ignoring..

It feels like im talking to you but like an imaginary friend,

is it wrong
just to miss you?

and fall in your arms?

i know your here all the time calling but at the same time ,it feels like your never attending to hear me scream,to hear me laugh ,

to hear me ddream of being with you...


I will do anything ,not to hurt you, who ever hurts you ,is my enemy until i die...

I DONT AGREE WITH LOVE ever in my life.But dont ask me why..

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Destinys_Fallen_Angel
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since 2004-05-06
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1 posted 2004-05-12 04:22 AM


great poem truly amazing...you are very good i really enjoyed this poem

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