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sweet_cute_palestinian04
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since 2004-04-11
Posts 418
Earth

0 posted 2004-05-11 04:26 PM




If people could understand who i am.,
Just judge me for what i am.

No more lies ,No more cries.
no more tears but alittle more cheers.

Just to remember the dayz..
and figure out the ways...

the wayz of remembering you and your smile.
that i cant ever changed for millions of miles..

if i could just only remember your name .
so i could just be the one you played,

im called a game ,that you just love to play,
May i pray to  stay?
and just to get outof this little messy game,,

i call it lame ,
and nothing but a waste of shame..

It really hurts to say i hate you ,but hey,this is your play ,you choose it to be this lame.

Let me say that i truly dont know what it means to hate. ,

but i know how straight it is,
i feel like  this world will never be one  soul mate ...

but thats life ,
so im not ready to be your wife..

AND THATs my point so dont you try to deny what i think its right.




I will do anything ,not to hurt you, who ever hurts you ,is my enemy until i die...

I DONT AGREE WITH LOVE ever in my life.But dont ask me why..

[This message has been edited by sweet_cute_palestinian04 (05-11-2004 06:19 PM).]

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Stepharoo
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since 2004-05-04
Posts 149
Washington, USA
1 posted 2004-05-11 05:15 PM


Wow I really like this...Its really good!!!
Great Job!!!
Keep it up.

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988
nowhere special
2 posted 2004-05-11 06:18 PM


wow... i think this might be one of your best...

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 418
Earth
3 posted 2004-05-11 06:22 PM


ohh thank u soo much sises...i truly aprriecate...but i got to admit ur poems are soooooo cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee...you too my sisters i love ur poems..so keep it upp..love and respect..grtt

peace


I will do anything ,not to hurt you, who ever hurts you ,is my enemy until i die...

I DONT AGREE WITH LOVE ever in my life.But dont ask me why..

[This message has been edited by sweet_cute_palestinian04 (05-11-2004 10:05 PM).]

Rommance_Touch
Member
since 2004-05-07
Posts 97

4 posted 2004-05-11 06:33 PM


Hello, Sweet how r u, i hope yr fine,,,any way,,,Till what we will hide our love,,,and when will shine like a sun...El-hamdu'allah we are humen not animals...we understand, we feel, we touch, we say i love u...NO scare of love as it a clear one...
The heart which knew the love couldnt know the hate cuz its not its character...its character the love...

LOVE YEA
~~Rommance_Touch~~
  ~~Not_Ended~~
    ~~G_w_5~~



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