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Rommance_Touch
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0 posted 2004-05-11 02:23 PM


The Waiting Moments
I have waited days
I have waited hours
I have waited you, my lover
I waited the moment of your meeting
My heart is pumping
My eyes are dazzles
My mind wasted
I saw your face while a smile is drawing
Showing a countenances of your life
Have a so sweet eyes
Tearing dreamy eyes
Relent a kind and lovely look
Gave her a more beauty
As benign aria reach the sky and
Come down to choice my heart between a singles
The muses has been sing but their pens infirmity to write
And the aria get silence and become my lover aria it’s the hearable
Reached the hearts as a voice of water in rut
As a hearable notebook of aria or carol and my lover was the master
Reached its aria to the hearts and invade it easy
But its aria came to me and covered me while the others of listeners watching in nonplus
Oooh fantastic, its awesome feeling
Her eyes hugged me by bouquet
Its balm melt the heart
She owned my heart
Her eyes like a bed u feel relax when u sleep
Her smile like a magic,
Impressed the world to watch her,
The hearts come pumping like a drumming,
And the birds of a hearts was orbit around her
Wishing a touch of her hand or a smile,
She attracted me and gave a kiss in a while
And the birds fall on the earth in disappointment
I am waiting you.



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Rommance_Touch
Member
since 2004-05-07
Posts 97

1 posted 2004-05-11 07:17 PM


Hello

if u c its nice work
c these too and please, Rate it, even if u said its bad i will be pelasure bc it will inform me to the truth.


  1. Unexpected Love
  2. Look,Smile, Appointment Then Meeting
  3. An Order Marriage
  4. waiting moments


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