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Stepharoo
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since 2004-05-04

Posts 149
Washington, USA

0 posted 2004-05-10 03:27 PM

As we leave to go home,
I hold you in my arms and say,
“Please don’t go”
You say you must,
Then I let your arms fall.
As I start to pull out of the drive way,
I begin to cry.
I then lift my head only to see you drive by.
I am quick to catch up,
Just to let you know I’m there.
I know you drive past my house, which isn’t to far.
And as I’m driving down the road with you in front of me,
I some how feel very safe to have you so close to me.
Then I see your blinker turn on,
I’m still not sure as to what your doing.
But still I don’t hesitate to follow.
I see you get out of your truck with your arms open wide,
I run to you, that’s no surprise.
Then you say to me “Just one last goodbye”.
I fall into your arms and begin to cry.
You squeeze me so tight and tell me everything will be all right.
As I lean my head back you kiss my lips so light.
I start to feel the tender breeze caress my neck,
As we climb into the back of your truck.
We lie on our backs and hold each other close.
Then we turn and look up at the stars that are afar.
You turn back to me and whisper in my ear,
“I am in love with you”.
I still can’t believe my ears.
We lie there till eleven o’clock,
And we both know you have to go.
I hug you once more before I let you go.
You tell me not to be sad,
For you will be back.
I climb out of the back of your truck,
And start walking back to my car,
I hear you coming behind me,
I turn back and look into your eyes.
Only to hear you tell me one last time,
“I love you, don’t forget that. I will be back in no time, just you mind that.”
I will never forget,
Last Night.

I wrote this poem so I will never foget last night. Now it may not be all that great, cause I just threw it together. But please let me know what you think. Thanks!

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

1 posted 2004-05-10 04:13 PM

I really like this. It has a kind of bittersweet feel to it.
Thanks for sharing.

W.W.
We were meant to live for so much more have we lost ourselves?
Maybe redemption has stories to tell maybe forgiveness is right where you fell.

Don_Juan
Member

since 2004-04-08

Posts 252
Far from where I am going

2 posted 2004-05-10 11:18 PM

defintley a powerful poem. keep writing

nice use of muffin

sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

3 posted 2004-05-11 07:05 PM

omg ,,,this is soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo amazing keep please keep posting..

love and respect

I will do anything ,not to hurt you, who ever hurts you ,is my enemy until i die...

I DONT AGREE WITH LOVE ever in my life.But dont ask me why..

Rommance_Touch
Member

since 2004-05-07

Posts 97

4 posted 2004-05-11 07:22 PM

SO Amazing....least words are the better...
hope to c u always writing....

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

5 posted 2004-05-11 11:03 PM

Hmmm... waht happened last night? huh? ~lol~ I liked this, it was very touching.. I think i will save it.

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

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