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Rommance_Touch
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since 2004-05-07
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0 posted 2004-05-10 10:10 AM




An Order Marriage

I am a little girl hm hm hm
I do not know my way hm hm hm
my parents will let me c it hm hm hm

I do not know how to love
I do not know how to feel
I do not know how to choice who I will love
My parents think that

You have to marry one of your folks with no choice
You do not have a choice

They will sale me hm hm hm
like a slave in the market

They will knock his door take your wife
They sole me in a market hm hm hm

I do not have to choice
I am a little girl
My parents think that

I was so afraid of him
He just a folk not more
He get naked
He gave me a kiss
We had a love in a bed and treat me like a bitch

My family sole me in a slaves market hm hm hm
I am a little girl
I do not have a choice
He do not feel me
He just needs a body
I hate to be like a bitch
I hate his touch

I am a little girl
I do not have a choice hm hm hm
I am admire someone I wanna him beside
I do not like my folk

Please dad, please mom I wanna my adore man
I hate my folk he just a folk I do not feel him

Mam, Dad
Mam, Dad
Mam, Dad
They just crying now
They bought me in a market

Mam, Dad
Mam, Dad
Mam, Dad
What will be the end ...........
Hm Hm Hm

~~i just figured how a parents be mistake in a girls rights and how they not let girls choice their lover and parents have a right to see how much he is suitable for their lovely daughter~~


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Fleur
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since 2004-04-09
Posts 103

1 posted 2004-05-10 02:17 PM


I know how it's like to be one. I've never tried it my self, but I have some friends who was married  on order. Hope you know what I mean.

-I'm glad that my parents aint like that. Nice poem, very touching.

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