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This solider misses you
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This solider misses you |
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Censored Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 86
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--I posted this at easter time in open poetry-- I wrote and gave this to my cousin who's father is in Iraq. Just wanted to share this. He leaves home just like every morning, Except this time he’ll be gone for a few He has no choice but to abandon everything he once knew… He’s off to fight a war, looking for peace. Now today, Easter dinner will have one less seat. His family is missing him the most While he’s clear across the coast. The love they share And how much they care Is not forgotten Because today… This solider misses you |
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sweet_cute_palestinian04 Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 418Earth |
wow.......great poem keep it up..sis,,well sis i will see u hopefully in the end on june i will be posting again im going dc my internet for abit..well u soon and love and respect peace A Friend's love says: |
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tapper798 Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 353My own world |
that was powerful, and really came together. I really liked it! Keep it up! "If ever you think of me out of the blue, just remember it's all the kisses I've blown in the air finally catching up with you!" |
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Stepharoo Member
since 2004-05-04
Posts 149Washington, USA |
I really like it! I thought that you writing this for your cousin was really sweet of you! Keep it up! |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
 ~Alli~ |
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Don_Juan Member
since 2004-04-08
Posts 252Far from where I am going |
it's sad but good none the less.keep writing nice use of muffin |
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