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sweet_cute_palestinian04
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since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

0 posted 2004-05-09 11:19 AM

you tricked me with your lies,
and your here because-?

you tricked me with your big lies,
you never even imagined if i hate you like now..

i told you we are not ment.
but you just ignore than and went on.

i hate you ,even though i dont know how strong that word means.

i hate you so much that i cant even look at you.
lying  SOO Deep ,dont you get it?

stop bothering me everywhere i go,
in my dreams,
in my wishes,
in my hopes
in everything i do,

stop being so not real,
your making everything so hard,,

i cant complete my dreams if you are here.
i cant wish when you  are by me.
i cant hope when you are around ,im so hopeless when your around.

and even in my own dreams you dont leave me alone,
when i get to the good part,you just appear..

dont you get it ,i dont have anything for you,,because im dead,...

    ONCE A TRICKER ALWAYZ A PRE-TRADER

peace
lovezz

Rommance_Touch
Member

since 2004-05-07

Posts 97

1 posted 2004-05-09 11:32 AM

hi,,nice story,,,its so clear yr in love or at least care abt him, he is in yr dreams, he in every way yr...

its a life, What We Love Isnt Easy To Get, maybe we fight and get it and maybe we fight and become more lovely for him

i hope fluer, c that and comment

~~Rommance_Touch~~
~~G_W_5~~

Fleur
Member

since 2004-04-09

Posts 103

2 posted 2004-05-09 11:42 AM

Just my words... He's everywhere but still so far away... Liked it, sis... Keep it up! Your write is amazing..

sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

3 posted 2004-05-09 11:52 AM

huh???....i dont get it ,im soo confused....omg...what ?,what? what??? ...whatever....

peace

A Friend's love says:
" If you ever need anything,
I'll be there."

True Love says:
" You'll never need anything;
I'll be here."

tapper798
Member

since 2003-07-20

Posts 353
My own world

4 posted 2004-05-13 07:08 PM

I thought it was really good. I really liked the part where you said they were with you everywhere, in your dreams, ect. That was good, you brought out alot of emotions like angry, and hate(heheh hate's all over it!) in this one and I really liked it. Good job.

"If ever you think of me out of the blue, just remember it's all the kisses I've blown in the air finally catching up with you!"
*~Erin~*

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

5 posted 2004-05-13 07:43 PM

Nice poem....really enjoyed it. Keep up the writing... (And pretty soon you could make a book of poetry!)

~Alli~

sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

6 posted 2004-05-13 07:58 PM

lolololol.....admit it sis i write alottt...haha....well thank u all for ur replies,,,sis i know i write too much and even soo wild lolol...welll love and respect....

peace

I will do anything ,not to hurt you, who ever hurts you ,is my enemy until i die...
I DONT AGREE WITH LOVE ever in my life.But dont ask me why..

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