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sweet_cute_palestinian04
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since 2004-04-11
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0 posted 2004-05-08 11:52 AM



People run away from fear,
and i just go into fear,

I go into worries just to have some kind of attention but than i pray to god to forget what i did.

I put myself in a place where no-one can stand to be ,but than i just dream of the day i was free.

The day where people can see,
See what i do is right,
and believe what i do is wrong,

but whats the difference?

cant we fix what we did and live on just to have a life of our own???


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This poem means alott to me ,by writting this poem ,i was trying to bring out my feelings by saying that every mistake we do ,its our fault so lets just fix it and live life LIKE IT IS...

i hope you like itt!!

peace


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Rommance_Touch
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since 2004-05-07
Posts 97

1 posted 2004-05-08 02:38 PM


Hi, Sweet, it depends on yr sin. is it a sin of afriad but its lovely or a sin wich make a mistake. Thats depend. nice one but make it more clear next time.
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