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Teen Poetry #7

catch me.

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

0 posted 2004-05-06 06:17 PM

Just when i think,
all hope is lost, all faith is gone,
I see your cute little grin,
i could stare at all day long.

You flood my soul with hope,
and even more my heart with faith.
Just the sight of you,
makes my heart feel safe.

I am falling in love with you,
im falling hard and fast.
I have jumped into this darkness,
too much like in the past.

Please say that you are different,
that you will catch me as i fall.
Please say you will always be there for me,
and help me through it all.

I'm taking a big risk,
by letting my feelings for you show.
I'm falling for you harder,
than i think you really know.

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

Stepharoo
Member

since 2004-05-04

Posts 149
Washington, USA

1 posted 2004-05-06 11:12 PM

Wow, I really like this...
Great Job!!!

WinterWren
Senior Member

since 2002-12-01

Posts 1044
...Coming to

2 posted 2004-05-06 11:44 PM

Excellent poem, I can really relate to it.

W.W.
We were meant to live for so much more have we lost ourselves?
Maybe redemption has stories to tell maybe forgiveness is right where you fell.

Deep_Inside
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 377
i can't stop hiding

3 posted 2004-05-07 12:58 PM

I liked this poem a lot. when I read it I get this feeling of desperation and the emotion in this poem is powerful...grate read...keep writing

As darkness covers the land, the fun has just begun

Fleur
Member

since 2004-04-09

Posts 103

4 posted 2004-05-07 01:04 PM

I liked it a lot!! It's amazing. Can't describe it... wow...

Snickers123
Member

since 2004-05-07

Posts 94
United States-Iowa

5 posted 2004-05-07 11:19 PM

That was awesome! Nice write

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