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sweet_cute_palestinian04
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since 2004-04-11
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Earth

0 posted 2004-05-05 12:36 PM



love,

is cancer that we never know how to fix.
it kills us with its longgraph..

is a picture with so much colors that shines my eyes .

isa bird withwings that makes it fly free ..

is like drugs ,but even more than getting us dead.

is a smile that never ends .

is a name with a meaning.

is my eyes that i see with.

my body that i move with.

is a dream ,that makes it real..

is a hope that make it feels.

is my breathe that makes it sweet...

.,my medicine that i need eveery now and then,,

BUT till now your what makes eveything so perfect and a dream come true...

even in my dreams you are real ,and in my heart your the sunshine that makes me feel like i want to live longer than i excpect to live...


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p.s
i wrote this poem a very long time ,,like 2 years ago,,,i hope you like it enjoyy and sorry about too much poems on ,,,i write alot..lolol..well enjoy it and hope you like it...

lovezzz

***peace***

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blackandwhitehorizon
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since 2003-05-05
Posts 183
an akward state of mind
1 posted 2004-05-05 07:24 PM


this is one of my favorites of yours so far !    

sweet_cute_palestinian04
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since 2004-04-11
Posts 418
Earth
2 posted 2004-05-05 07:58 PM


ohh thank u  soo much  for ur replies and honesty i really thank u ...lovezz peace
Stepharoo
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since 2004-05-04
Posts 149
Washington, USA
3 posted 2004-05-05 08:03 PM


I likd this one...Keep it up!!!
Snickers123
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since 2004-05-07
Posts 94
United States-Iowa
4 posted 2004-05-08 12:03 PM


It was sweet, I liked how you compared it to things. Nice write!

~*.:Leah:.*~

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