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Don_Juan
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since 2004-04-08
Posts 252
Far from where I am going

0 posted 2004-05-04 10:40 PM




Excused Absence

unfocused
wondering bloodshot eyes
smokers cough unerwater
incapacitated
crazy glued to a couch
tear ducts full, mouth is dry
your sick and there's
nothing you can do
but stick your
head in a bucket
and bid farewell
to your lunch
muscles atrophy
flame erupts from your body
and is caught by a quilt
nostrils drain away
as your nose
runs down your face
into a kleenex
your sick and there's
nothing you can do
but stick you
head in a bucket
and bid farewell
to your lunch
get some sleep
easier wrote than done
fire in the throat
and the forehead
deter any sense
of relaxation
drink some ginger ale
the smell alone
make honking into
the plae more appetizing
your sick and there's
nothing you can do
but stick your
head in a bucket
and bid farewell
to your lunch
sick days
nothing better
getting time off
but right now
i'd rather stare
aimlessly into that
blackboard

yeah i defintely had some spare time. it's not the best but would appreciate some comments. oh by the way honking is another term for vomiting. hope you like it.

nice use of muffin

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Jenabou
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since 2000-06-13
Posts 215
Oklahoma/Nova Scotia Canada/USA
1 posted 2004-05-04 11:00 PM


I liked this, it was nice comic relief
and Hey there aint no shame,we've all been there
keep writing!

*for someone who's used to heartache,losing it all was just a matter of time*
Be kind,for everyone you meet is fighting a harder battle

Censored
Member
since 2004-04-11
Posts 86

2 posted 2004-05-04 11:29 PM


Well this was very interesting to read! lol. I still rather be sticking my head in a bucket then starring at the blackboard tho Censored.
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