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Teen Poetry #7

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TheGirlNoOneKnew
Member

since 2003-12-04

Posts 92
PA, USA

0 posted 2004-05-04 03:30 AM

He whispers softly in your ear
and starts to pull you near
you're so lost in his eyes
that you miss his disguise
and his kind words you don't hear.

His hands slide up your thighs
and you let out a soft sigh
thinking that he's a god
when really you're so far off
and should be questioning why.

The lights are turned down low
it's just you and him alone
he kisses you so hard
and you can't tell in the dark
but all of your morals have flown.

blackandwhitehorizon
Member

since 2003-05-05

Posts 183
an akward state of mind

1 posted 2004-05-04 06:10 PM

ahh... i reallly like this

"love is but a song we sing and fear's the way we die"

Stepharoo
Member

since 2004-05-04

Posts 149
Washington, USA

2 posted 2004-05-04 09:51 PM

Wow, great job!
Keep up the good work!

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

3 posted 2004-05-04 10:25 PM

hmmm...
I enjoyed every part of this.
especially the end.
the connection between literal blindness and figurtive.

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