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Teen Poetry #7

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sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

0 posted 2004-05-02 03:13 PM

why cant you understand,
i dont want you,
i dont need you,
i hate you..

you made me go through trouble and forced me to listent to you ,

your nothing but a stupid guy on chat.
you player.
you nasty player.

dont you think to hurt me more with your words..
your words mean nothing now..they mean nothinG at all..

i truly hate you with all my heart,,,
you better know something if you keep bothering me with your stupid emails,phone calls..

there is no way im going to be back with you,
i gave you chances over chances..

but you dont desreve them anymore..so i suggest ,you would leave now.

Snickers123
Member

since 2004-05-07

Posts 94
United States-Iowa

1 posted 2004-07-07 05:36 PM

not bad, i can see the feeling behind it, keep writing

~*.:Leah:.*~

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

2 posted 2004-07-10 11:53 PM

I can really feel your anger boiling.

NICE JOB . . . KEEP ON SHARING!

~Alli~

Rommance_Touch
Member

since 2004-05-07

Posts 97

3 posted 2004-07-11 05:27 PM

Hey, Hey
This is like a hot angre message,,,,The love is over and the heat had the place,,,,**** , its empty love

fearing-laughter
Senior Member

since 2001-04-24

Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)

4 posted 2004-07-12 03:28 AM

hey,
yeah this is cool. no matter what, angry creates good poetry. weird huh? i hope you resolve the situation and stuff. keep posting please.

bergundy

Stepharoo
Member

since 2004-05-04

Posts 149
Washington, USA

5 posted 2004-07-13 08:24 PM

I agree with everyone about how much you can feel the anger in this. I like it, I can really kinda almost relate to it, lol.
Awesome, keep it up!

Rommance_Touch
Member

since 2004-05-07

Posts 97

6 posted 2004-07-14 08:39 PM

Hey,,,,So deep anger voice,,,,its a deeply anger message,,,lets be close to u,,,,,lets know whats beside u,,,,give us a clue what did he do,,,,to get u so anger like,,,in a sweet poem way

Rommance_Touch

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