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tapper798
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since 2003-07-20
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0 posted 2004-05-02 12:14 PM



The way to our Love

I hear our beautiful song
And a smile crosses my face
The lyrics of the song
Are not ones I can erase.

I remember back to the days,
When we were just friends,
Ignoring what could be,
What might bring our friendship to an end.

We’d talk a little online
Every now and then
But it wasn’t like it is now,
It didn’t hurt to bring it to an end.

Our conversations grew longer,
More in depth with each other,
But we still wouldn’t admit it,
Our true feelings we still covered.

Months went by with
A hello here and there.
Not talking for weeks on end,
It was something I could bare.

In the middle of our conversation
on one very special night,
I asked you a simple question,
You answered it with delight.

We both confessed our feelings
Our built up feelings inside
The ones we’d had for months
The ones we’d tried to hide.

Now, going without
Talking to you for one day,
I suddenly feel as if
My life has lost its way.

You’re my true love,
My one special guy,
If I were without you,
Surly I would die.

I have yet to be in the presence
of your beautiful smile.
But knowing your out there waiting for me
Makes the wait worthwhile.

Let me know what you think! This is for a very special person in my life. I love him very much!
-Erin

"If ever you think of me out of the blue, just remember it's all the kisses I've blown in the air finally catching up with you!"
  *~Erin~*

© Copyright 2004 Erin - All Rights Reserved
sweet_cute_palestinian04
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since 2004-04-11
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1 posted 2004-05-02 02:21 AM


i truly loved it ,,when i saw this poem posted i was going crazy because i wanted to hear more from yea and i did thank god lolol..well i loved it and please keep writting...lovesssssss
tapper798
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since 2003-07-20
Posts 353
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2 posted 2004-05-02 10:49 AM


Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it! I just read over my poem and saw something I'd like to change just to let u guys know!

Now, going without
Talking to you for one day,
I suddenly feel as if
My life has lost its way

I think talking needs to go on the first line, it flows better don't cha think? Well, thanks again!

"If ever you think of me out of the blue, just remember it's all the kisses I've blown in the air finally catching up with you!"
  *~Erin~*

Fleur
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since 2004-04-09
Posts 103

3 posted 2004-05-03 02:05 PM


This is amazinG! Very nice joB! It's so sweet.. Oh my God! ... I'm sure he'll be happy about this...
Snickers123
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since 2004-05-07
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4 posted 2004-12-02 05:25 PM


that was beautiful, I really enjoyed it.
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5 posted 2004-12-02 07:51 PM


Amazing Erin...wow!

~Alli~

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