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Don_Juan
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Far from where I am going

0 posted 2004-05-01 07:24 PM



Poke, Prod, Disgrace, and Condesend

care of nothing
no one
care only of yourself.
Jester of society
stand up
take recognition
for your foolishness.
poke, prod,
disgrace, and condesend.
the story of your life
use those less fortunate
as a stepping stone for YOUR SUCCESS!
get what you want
take more than you need.
poke, prod,
disgrace, and condesend.
your way of life
follow your ambitions
and i hope you fail
just to taste
what cooking you
make me ingest each day.
you are a MOCCERY
of what you once were!
cockiness, and overconfidence
the only traits
you put to use
you immoral son of a saint
destined for greatness
but is never deserving
of such a title.
You insult, You instigate
POKE, PROD,
DISGRACE, and CONDESEND!
Disowned child of all that is good
adoptee of all that is evil
all that you had come to hate
you now embrace
Screw you and your insults
Screw you and your ambitions
FORGET YOU!
disappear from life
please just do me that favor
it's the least you can do
because you pride
will never allow you
to apologize
for all the pain
and torment
you've put me through

ok this is the really clean version of the poem. (my apologies to the moderators/admin for the first version of the poem.) anywho it's not the best but i hope you enjoy it somewhat

nice use of muffin

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In Your Poetic Mind
1 posted 2004-05-01 07:29 PM


Thank you...     I appreciate you doing that so quickly....

I know how frustrating life can be sometimes, you have expressed that here....hope things get better for you....


~~**~~
le vent chante avec le calme doux
calme de nuit
sien beauté sur mes lèvres
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[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (05-01-2004 09:40 PM).]

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