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Fleur
Member

since 2004-04-09

Posts 103

0 posted 2004-05-01 10:56 AM

I just wrote what I felt, I would appreciate if you could tell me if I there's any mistakes in it, because i'm not that good at english, so... Thanks anyway..

Racism

When you call me names,
I don’t like it at all,
I want to scream loud,
But i’m too unsure.

How can a friend like you,
Still call me names like an immature,
Things and names which hurts me,
And make me feel so tiny.

I don’t know how to act,
Or how to express my feelings,
Only one thing i’m sure;
In this country i’m all alone.

I talk to my friends about this,
They don’t understand the feelings,
There’s only a friend who understands,
But she’s way too away from me.

I wish I could leave,
Forget all this and be free,
To my country where I belong,
Away from the people I don’t love.

This feeling is growing bigger and bigger,
Finally I know what it is called;
Only HATE can be the word,
To the people I despite for real.

Racism got the HATE in me on fire,
I can’t describe, it’s like a desire,
But the control is not mine anymore,
-soon you’ll feel the pain I’ve felt,
-... and much more.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

1 posted 2004-05-01 11:06 AM

the control is yours, turn the other cheek.... ''dont fight fire with fire''....you have a choice.....

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le vent chante avec le calme doux
calme de nuit
sien beauté sur mes lèvres
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sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

2 posted 2004-05-01 12:28 PM

wow..this poem is teriffic ....i loved it ..but listen sis take my advice people who call are mean and call names are the ones that are jealous..tehre doont like themseleves and try to get you with themm...but just be strong and stand for what you believe and try to get away from them...and rememeber you only live once..so dont make them hurt you more..there is nothing more important than your health....and even me when sometimes i feel the same i go online and talk to people online just to help me lolol..but dont take this advice lolol..well take care and god bless you....

and you have oo much talent dont forget that...

love and respect

Fleur
Member

since 2004-04-09

Posts 103

3 posted 2004-05-03 06:13 AM

Thanks for your comments! I really appreciate this!

Fleur
Member

since 2004-04-09

Posts 103

4 posted 2004-05-03 01:55 PM

It's specially hard, when you're a muslim in a christian country....

-Hope you all liked it...

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