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sweet_cute_palestinian04
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Earth

0 posted 2004-04-29 11:05 PM



when i see you,,
i say heaven's earth is coming onto me..

when i smell you,
i smell the most sweetest flower on this wonderful earth.

when talk to you,
i feeling like im talking to an angel that feels with so much deeper than the ocean...

when i need you.
i need the medicine you give me  that controls me like drugz..

when i look at your picture..
its like i seen soo such gift that god sended me to keep me alive..

when i walk by and hear you talking to your boyz...
i feel like kissing you soo hard and never letting go..

but when i feel you ..
its soo such another thing that i cant say [its private] but i can tell you  its wonderful and i will never trade it even with my life....

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1 posted 2004-04-29 11:09 PM


you certainly expressed your feelings well lol
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