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Teen Poetry #7

DROPS of love

sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

0 posted 2004-04-29 09:38 PM

holding tears before people realize i can cry..
going out ,just to ignore the blood running down my heart..

drops of blood going down my eyes.
drops of pain and feeling like im not alive.

trying to ignore that i have something but i cant show..

going out ,cooking ,cleaning ,studying, ,even in my dreams you appear..

but can i ignore that i love you?
can i ignore that i need you??

you may think that i forgot you but ,you is everything i do and everything i need..

i cant control the love i have for you...
just going online or on the phone checking if you called..or atleastecared?

but i cant go on to you and hold you ,because your the man ,if you dont love ,you cant stand..

so why should i bother to fly?
drops of air feeling soo cool and even worst than cold...

but can that be love ,im needing?
or is it just alittle young teenager?

but my love for you is not love but it is life...

remember the dDROPS OF LOVE RUNNING THROUGH my head and my eyes and espcially my heart will never be gone until the day you know i willl die..

drops of love

i call it ....................
.................................
....................................

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

1 posted 2004-05-01 09:42 PM

awwwww, and such sweet drops they are....heart hugssss 'I remember' those days....

~~**~~
le vent chante avec le calme doux
calme de nuit
sien beauté sur mes lèvres
~~**~~

SwEeTnSeXy18
Member

since 2000-09-18

Posts 247
nc

2 posted 2004-06-28 05:24 PM

WoW! This is amazing...I love how you compare tears and blood mixed w/pain. I think at any age you can love someone...who is anyone to tell you how you feel, are they you? Age is just a number to me and there are SO many kinds of love!! Great poem!

Lisa

~in order to gain, you have to lose~

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