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DancinQueen
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0 posted 2004-04-29 04:10 AM



I need you
more than words express
I want to fix
everything that's broken
But where do I begin
when I'm walking here
alone

I gave up on love
'til you gave me breath
everything was o.k.
inside your arms
And for a moment
I felt alive again

Your name lingers
inside my emptiness
And your eyes burn
inside the depths
of my heart

Hold my hand again
make me whole
give me life
make me yours

All I'm asking
is for you
to love me again

'Cause baby I need you
more than I need myself

I love you

**You can't always trust the people you want to**

© Copyright 2004 Kiley - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-04-29 05:00 AM


Nice to see you around again Kiley---

You write just like I remember---sweet, sincere, caring, from the heart.  Always with grace & class...

Take care of yourself, honey  


"God becomes as we are that we may be as he is."  ~William Blake

DancinQueen
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2 posted 2004-04-29 05:04 AM


aww HI!! Gosh I haven't written in so long.  I thought I'd forgotten how.  This was just whipped out in like 10mins.  But it's something, which is better than nothing.  Miss ya

**You can't always trust the people you want to**

sweet_cute_palestinian04
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3 posted 2004-04-29 08:26 PM


wow...i loved it keep it uppp....nice poemm awesomeeeeeee
blackandwhitehorizon
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4 posted 2004-04-29 08:59 PM


very touching
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5 posted 2004-04-29 10:41 PM


cute poem. keep up the good work!
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6 posted 2004-05-02 07:32 PM


It looks like I popped in for my bi-weekly survey of the blue pages on the right day

Great to read more of your words; it's been too long

there's a thousand places I'd like to be, but in your arms would be Heaven

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