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Poet on Acid
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since 2001-01-07
Posts 325
Florida, USA

0 posted 2004-04-28 02:31 PM



I loved you once
with all my heart
but that love
was ripped apart

I gave you my all
everything I had
just to be left
lonely and sad

Now theres a chance
to be with you again
a chance to go back
to what we had then

Sitting here reading
the things you said
with memories of you
running through my head

I just want to hold you
and feel you next to me
I want to give all my love to you
and know you'll never leave

-"Poet Nascitar, Non Fit"
        -"A Poet Is Born, Not Made"

© Copyright 2004 Tony Ryan Johnson - All Rights Reserved
sweet_cute_palestinian04
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since 2004-04-11
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Earth
1 posted 2004-04-28 04:08 PM


wow...im saving this if u dont mind this is gr88 poem keep it upp
kissa~rachelle
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since 2003-11-27
Posts 988
nowhere special
2 posted 2004-04-28 04:11 PM


amazing.. i luv it... Im saving... if u dont mind.

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

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The World of Poetry
3 posted 2004-04-28 04:23 PM


incredable poem....i lovd it!
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Member Rara Avis
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In Your Poetic Mind
4 posted 2004-04-28 06:01 PM


so good to see you posting again Tony, and glad you could sign in under your 'Name'
I really enjoyed this...

~~**~~
The way you move me
I walk with your shadow
With your silhouette
Leave the light on
It always comes
Back to you
~~**~~

Censored
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since 2004-04-11
Posts 86

5 posted 2004-04-29 10:48 PM


Cute
DancinQueen
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6 posted 2004-04-30 03:52 AM


I always liked your work.  Simple but powerful, as usual.  Once again, great job.

**You can't always trust the people you want to**

fearing-laughter
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since 2001-04-24
Posts 605
land of cheese (Wisconsin)
7 posted 2004-05-02 02:43 AM


aww, hey tony. what's up? i really liked this one...good job.  

-bergundy-

"Be who you want and do what you will, in the end those who matter won't mind, and those who mind won't matter." -Dr Suess- (a brilliant man)

tapper798
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since 2003-07-20
Posts 353
My own world
8 posted 2004-05-02 10:51 AM


Very good one!

"If ever you think of me out of the blue, just remember it's all the kisses I've blown in the air finally catching up with you!"
  *~Erin~*

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