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sweet_cute_palestinian04
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0 posted 2004-04-27 10:53 PM



Deep inside these walls of shame..
Deep inside these walls of blame..

what can i do?
what can i do?
what can i do?

i screwed up soo many times and i know no matter what i do you wont believe that i learned my lesson..

i screwed up soo many times and i know i will never be back as the old me..

i screw up soo many times and i know people cant trust anymore than i can be..

i screwed up soo many times and i know im the blame.

thats why im going through soo much pain.

i cry on these walls of shame and of these promises i made ,but i guess i faild..

i still want my trust back but

how?
why?
can i?
do i desreve to?
shame one me
i dont think i desreve this wonderful world that call my life.
shame on me and on my stupid brian..

i just killed my family's trust ..
i just have killed my own friends trust.
and more importantlyy my heart's trust.

is there anything i can?
is there anything i can be on?
is there anything i can blame?

i guess nothing in this world is mine ,.but the blood i have just turned into water that has no need to be alive...

without my family's trust

WHAT AM I???
HOW CAN I BE?
WHY DO I DESREVE TO BE?


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In Your Poetic Mind
1 posted 2004-04-28 12:13 PM


because you are beautiful and second chances should always be given you need to grant that to yourself....chin up...hugsss dear....email me if you need to vent....

~~**~~
The way you move me
I walk with your shadow
With your silhouette
Leave the light on
It always comes
Back to you
~~**~~

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (04-28-2004 12:47 AM).]

sweet_cute_palestinian04
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since 2004-04-11
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2 posted 2004-04-28 12:38 PM


thank u soo much for alwayz being here for me i really thank u for ur comments love and hugzz ...

with all my repect and love..

kissa~rachelle
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since 2003-11-27
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nowhere special
3 posted 2004-04-28 04:20 PM


wow... this is amazing. I love it. I know what it's like to lose ur family's trust, and i know it isnt easy to gain it back, but just because it isnt easy, doesnt mean it is impossible!! Very beautiful poem.

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

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