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sweet_cute_palestinian04
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0 posted 2004-04-27 12:36 PM



Asi looked so deep in your eyes ,seeing something was wrong,fish swimming soo much in these dark eyes
.

As you had an excuse for yourself to leave me with no heart that you stole and never returned..

As you excused yourself to leave me with no trust and beyond this dark flight..

As i looked at you saying this world is empty with no trust,you gave me this look like you believed that you were wrong and you just wanted to explode from this circle of life.

As i picked up my heart from the trash ,you just stole it again and left ,saying you will always be mine and thats never a good bye..

I ASKED

why??
how??
when?

atleaste you should of gave me back my heart and the things you said that made you soo kind and gave you a great smile...


but i dont mind ,you may keep them ..
until i find away out and get the trust from my family and friends back..


I
FOUGHT
CRIED
DIED

BUT I NEVER FORGOT WHAT DEATH MENT LIKE UNTIL THAT MOMENT OF saying GOODBYES with soo much un-understandble excuses
..


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sweet_cute_palestinian04
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1 posted 2004-04-27 12:39 PM


this is a poem i wrote when i lost everything and i knew love was'nt worth to loose your tear on .....
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