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in the pouring rain

0 posted 2004-04-25 04:15 PM



one night


v.1 its always the tears that make everything right
when you lay in his arms and promise not to cry
but do it anyway
just because one night in your life can change who you are
make you realize that life is meant for more
than just joy rides
and the things you say are always taken to heart with me
so be careful with your words...choose them carefully


ch. make sure tonight is the best night i've ever had
cause i don't know for sure when i'll see you again
i won't forget watching you smile
even if it was just for a little while
your laugh is still in my memory
i'll carry it every where, just don't forget me
because one night is everything in my eyes


v.2 if we're sitting on the concrete steps and i laugh
smile at me with your eyes and say it right back
and the stars will cover us and everything is moving slow
the night will end faster than we can know
and i didn't even get to hold your hand one time
or tell you that you've already made a difference in my life


ch.
end. it doesn't matter to me what they say...i'd gladly spend every minute of every day...remembering that night

no matter what i'll always love you
i swear

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1 posted 2004-04-25 09:51 PM


"it doesn't matter to me what they say...i'd gladly spend every minute of every day...remembering that night"

Loved this poem and can totally relate! Check out my lastest post, it's about a night like the one you so perfectly described.

Life is a moderately good play w/ a badly written thrid act. - Unknown

Riley
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2 posted 2004-04-26 06:52 PM


thank you for your comment....the perfect night really does exist...hmmm

no matter what i'll always love you
i swear

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