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sweet_cute_palestinian04
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0 posted 2004-04-23 12:04 PM





Seeing the moniter turning colors of love.
Acting as you cant believe your eyes.

Believing what you know is not true but you just ignore.
acting like you believe internet lies and proving all people are full of lies..

Seeing colors of love going red to white and green to black but can you believe your eyes?

they say "internet is full of lliesss that does not even exist" but i say internet is full of love....

my friends say dont believe what he says he is probably faking that out to make you smile..

my family say dont you believe internet lies there nothing but that will get intouble for the rest of your life..

but i say internet is my life..

showing me his heart can that be full of lies?
showing me his face that gets me going on for miles that makes me dream of never leaving this wonderful guy..

BUt i cant believe you until you try.
they say internet is full of colors of love but what i discovered is thati say internet is all liesssssssssssssssssss...

so dont believe internet lies all they want is to dream to go have sex from the first night..


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if im disrespect you guyz out there im sorry and i dont mean you i mean some guyzz lolol..
hope you like it :-]

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1 posted 2004-04-23 06:32 PM


Sorry, but I kinda found this poem boring.  It's my opinion and I'm sure that lots of other people will love it, but it's just not MY kind of poem.

~Alli~

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