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Teen Poetry #7

So what if I love it?

Match
Member

since 2002-07-01

Posts 286
Canada Edmonton

0 posted 2004-04-22 10:10 PM

With just a kiss from your lips,
Im on my knees.
You always wait for the reaction
Which never changes,
Im on my knees.
You're so vulgar!
so what If I like it?
Im on my knees.
Im your sexual secret
So what if I love it?
Im on my knees.
Who cares if i'm pierced?
Who cares if it hurts?
Who cares if i'm broken?
I'm always on my knees
Waiting for your next command.

http://www.enternexus.com/profile.php?uid=34810 <----Thats all me

Don_Juan
Member

since 2004-04-08

Posts 252
Far from where I am going

1 posted 2004-04-22 11:27 PM

whoa. well all in all i liked it. it just seemed kind of risque (if thats how you spell it)
either way good job

nice use of muffin

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