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Deep_Inside Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 377i can't stop hiding |
Depression my friend Please take me away from here I can’t stand it for a minute longer The pain burns my flesh How has life gotten this low Witch wrong turn did I make I’ve searched for so long But the world seems to evade me Just out of grasp Everything’s right out there Sanity is just out of grasp What is this magic holding me behind I’m drowning is a pool of my own tears And I can’t find the plug on the drain Please give me a smile Please keep me sane when you live you begin to die |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Wow. The imagery is great and you expressed your emotions very well. Nice job!  ~Alli~ |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
well, I'm not sure what everything you want to know. because theres a lot of everythings that make up the BIG everything. non sense. this is good. I can relate to that feeling that things are just out of your reach. So much frusterations... I hope you feel better hon |
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