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Riley
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in the pouring rain

0 posted 2004-04-19 07:53 PM


this is just something kinda crazy...just cause sometimes guys think that they are all that and that a girl can't beat them....


i'm the rebel
always looked down on
because i am different
i don't wear the right kind of clothes
i couldn't spend hours on my hair
doin it just right every morning
just to impress no one
and i don't mind my make-up running
half way down my face...
it gives me an individual look
when i glance at the mirror

i'm a little country
walkin around in torn jeans
saturday and sunday
somedays i just don't feel like trying
and throw my hair up
i'll walk around with no shoes on somedays
no fingernail polish to make me look
sophisticated when i'm not

i'm an athlete
don't you think you'll catch me
in a skirt anyday
'cause i got to many scrapes and bruises
up and down my legs
maybe i'll have a black eye
by the time the game is through
and if you come out with none
then you didn't play hard enough....
i'll give my 100 percent
to anything i try
and trust me if i wanted to
i could beat anyone...

i'm a girl
with one kickin attitude
don't get me mad by sayin there something i can't do
because anything you challenge me too
i'll do it just for fun
and if you wanna say one nasty thing to me
it'll come back to haunt you one day...
when you see me standing on your front porch...
challenging you to play...

i'm sitting in the dark....waiting...
waiting for you to see me.

© Copyright 2004 Riley Grant - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-04-20 12:44 PM


I liked this very much It flowed just right to me..good ideas nice write.

Im a child.

Ixxi
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2 posted 2004-04-20 11:43 AM


"Walking around in torn jeans"

I like this; it reminds me of me!

It's a good thing to be proud of looking different; you and I both have the right to look exactly how we want, so why not go crazy!

"Where paper cuts, and bloody hands, In the middle, they will meet"
- Funeral For A Friend

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3 posted 2004-04-21 06:01 PM


You expressed all your feelings very well and the poem flowed good. Great job!!!

~Alli~

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4 posted 2004-04-22 12:57 PM


Rock on girl, I all of a sudden have this huge urge to go blast van Halen and get my soccer ball out! I loved this, it brought a huge smile to my face and I really needed that!
~Live and Laugh~

The nice thing about being a pesimest is that your either right, or pleasantly surprised.
~Bella~

Riley
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5 posted 2004-04-22 07:47 AM


glad everyone liked it!

heh!

riley

no matter what i'll always love you
i swear

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6 posted 2004-04-29 11:00 PM


Great job!
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7 posted 2004-04-29 11:07 PM


this poem ,,,,im soo glad that i read it ,,its wonderful ,awesome keep it uppp
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8 posted 2004-05-02 07:35 PM


Atta girl
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