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you'd never expect it
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you'd never expect it |
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wishing on a star Junior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 19sleeping in my warm bed =) |
you'd never expect it couldn't be your child right under your nose your kids becoming wild you'd never expect it but your kid does drugs sniffin,smokin,inhalin you ask them why and they shrug you'd never expect it but it happens every day you think they act like angels how could it happen this way you'd never expect it but now you know try to be understanding they need a friend not a foe young naive & vulnerable to the world |
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Match Member
since 2002-07-01
Posts 286Canada Edmonton |
I liked the beginning, but to me the end didnt fit..anyways it was still enjoyed  Im a child. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
I feel the same way. It was great and I really enjoyed it - except that the rhyming sounded alittle forced. Don't worry though, I do that too. ~Alli~ |
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wishing on a star Junior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 19sleeping in my warm bed =) |
thanx u guyses! young naive & vulnerable to the world |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
wow. I agree with the whole meaning of it, and the rhyming did sound alittle forced, but thats okay, i still like it.~lol~ kissa I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling |
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