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sweet_cute_palestinian04
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since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

0 posted 2004-04-15 03:07 AM

IN MY EYES

I see love as an fruit full of vitamins that keeps me strong and healthy.

In my eyes

I see love as halff of my body that keep me going on .

In my eyes

I SEE love as food,water,oqygen

IN my eyes i see love as a calender that keeps going on for centries.

In my eyes i see love asa flying bird with joy and happiness.

IN MY EYES I SEE LOVE AS ALL THE WORLD IN ONE.

IN My eyes I see people are one.

IN MY EYES YOUR EVERything i need and everything i stand on ,your the air i breathe and the food i need.in my eyes its only you and only you..

Fleur
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since 2004-04-09

Posts 103

1 posted 2004-04-15 11:13 AM

WOW! Amazing!!! Gooo Girl! That was brilliant!

kissa~rachelle
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since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

2 posted 2004-04-15 04:10 PM

wow, that was...amazing. I loved this.
*i am saving this.

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

sweet_cute_palestinian04
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since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

3 posted 2004-04-15 04:49 PM

thanks 4 ur comments... IT REALLLLY MADE ME PROUD lol...

::^love^::

infinite disaster
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since 2003-06-01

Posts 69
Illinois

4 posted 2004-04-15 05:20 PM

Hey ... this one was really good. Keep up the good work.
Much love, Akie.

When I find the courage, I will embrace you. When I find the strength, I will erase you.

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

5 posted 2004-04-15 06:29 PM

Very, very nice job!

~Alli~

Riley

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since 2002-07-18

Posts 1038
in the pouring rain

6 posted 2004-04-16 07:18 PM

this was good...but to me it felt a little cliche. maybe its just me...but ok none the less..

-rileyleanne-

i'm sitting in the dark....waiting...
waiting for you to see me.

Don_Juan
Member

since 2004-04-08

Posts 252
Far from where I am going

7 posted 2004-04-21 10:39 PM

i agree with everyone on this. i liked this poem alot

sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

8 posted 2004-04-23 12:04 PM

thank u all soo much i reallly thank u muahzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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