End - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Petey
Junior Member

since 2002-12-16

Posts 27
Idaho, USA

0 posted 2004-04-14 10:03 PM

End

Despite your past relationships,
Regardless of your history,
Even though you've been hurt before,
I know love has brought you hardship.
In my heart I feel guilty
For makingyour heart feel sore.
In spite of all these things
I'm hoping you'll say you love me too.

Even after so many rejections
How can I expect
Anyone to return my affections?
Especially those who are my elect.
The ones in the past, my reflections.
No love can I detect.
But I love you anyway
Inside I hope you feel the same.

We've seen our friends
Brought to dead ends
Love lead them blindly down the road of destruction.
Their love they justify and defend,
But still they let their standards bend.
Maybe not in love we bring construction.
In the past we've seen better days.
Even though I want my feelings to send,
It's time for this love to end.

Those who live by the sword, get shot by those who don't.

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

1 posted 2004-04-14 10:33 PM

Oh wow. I dont think you realize how mch i can relate to this.... i am going through like basically the same thing. I'm trying to get over this guy, but deep down i dont want to

, but know that i need, and have to. Oh wow.... Amazing write!!!

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

2 posted 2004-04-15 01:01 AM

wow..gr88 poem really touched my heart soo deep..im going through this ,,,.......

Cinderelly
Member

since 2001-12-31

Posts 189
NM, USA

3 posted 2004-04-15 01:48 AM

Wow! This is almost . . . I normally don't like poems that have so many ryhmes but this blew me away! -Jamie

Life is a moderately good play w/ a badly written thrid act. - Unknown

loner187
Member

since 2004-03-21

Posts 106
Upstate New York

4 posted 2004-04-16 10:55 AM

Uh, this is really deep...I can't relate at the moment, just getting into a relationship, but I know that there are plenty of people out there that feel your pain. Some parts I felt were a tad forced, but keep writing, man! You know how to express yourself well...good

The first step to recovery is to admit your addiction. So, here it is:

I, Amanda Barmash, am addicted to Ben Harper.

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.