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Teen Poetry #7

Forgive me

sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

0 posted 2004-04-14 08:56 PM

THIS IS A POEM I WROTE TO MY MAN WHEN ME AND HIM WEREGOING THROUGH TROUBLE.. WHEN WE THOUGHT WE WER GOING TO SEPERATE..
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forgive me if im notthe one.
forgive me if im not the mother of your kids.

forgive if i cant be with you.
forgive me if i cant reach you,

forgive me if im not your angel.
forgive me if i dont love you anymore.

forgive me if i loose you.
forgive me if idont need you.

forgive me if i would never be with you.
forgive me if i ever spoke to you.

forgive me if i once ask you to love me,
forgive me if i cant talk to you.

forgive me if i cant help you.
forgive me if i never told you i loved you.

forgive if i will wait for you,
forgive if i die for you..

BUT PLEASE DONT FORGIVE ME IF I LEAVE YOU...[
WITHOUT YOU IM NOTHING BUT FOOD WITHOUT TASTE ,
IM NOTHING BUT A NAME WITHOUT A MEANING.

::^LOVE^::

xno4everx
Junior Member

since 2004-04-08

Posts 14
NY

1 posted 2004-04-14 10:52 PM

this poem is confusing at times..honestly i didn't like it too much..i know what your tryin to say but too many of the "forgive me's"

//..Two souls with but a single thought, two hearts that beat as one..\\

sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

2 posted 2004-04-15 12:07 PM

its alright..i respect your opinion ,,in my eyes it means alottttttttt
but thanks anywayz

"LOVE"

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