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xjewelsx
New Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 3

0 posted 2004-04-11 03:50 PM

I saw you at school, down the hall;
There you were standing tall.
My lips shut tight, my breath was thin,
You took a step forward again and again.
My heart ran fast, faster than light,
I tried to stop shaking with all my might.
Then you were there in front of me,
My mind went blank my heart set free.
You held my hand, our eyes had met,
At then i knew our hearts were set.
You held my waist but slightly missed,
and not before long we had kissed.
I took a deep breath and opened my eyes,
At wat I found to my surprise,
My heart had stopped, the kiss had too,
Cuz in my dreams I saw you..*

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

1 posted 2004-04-11 06:37 PM

WOW! I love this poem! You described it so well and it flowed nice. Can't wait to read more.
Also, welcome to Passions!

~Alli~

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

2 posted 2004-04-11 07:37 PM

kool. I have those dreams a alot.
~lol~
Amazin write.

I want a relationship i can finally sink my teeth into.~ Alexander Sterling

sweet_cute_palestinian04
Member

since 2004-04-11

Posts 418
Earth

3 posted 2004-04-11 11:55 PM

greatt poem ....keep ur talent show

Fleur
Member

since 2004-04-09

Posts 103

4 posted 2004-04-12 08:45 AM

Amazing poem!! I love it!! Keep up the good work.. It's amazing, I mean that!! wow...

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

5 posted 2004-04-12 11:44 PM

Hi, and Welcome to Passions we are glad you have joined our circle of friends, and family….

please check your email for a special greeting

Kindly

Greeneyes~

~~**~~
The sound of silence calls,
I hear your voice and suddenly
I'm falling, lost in a dream
The echo of our souls meet
~~**~~

Fleur
Member

since 2004-04-09

Posts 103

6 posted 2004-04-14 02:43 PM

Amazing Poem! You don't know, how much it really means to me! It maybe sounds weird... But that's just.... yeah... forget it... This is great!!

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