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Fleur
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0 posted 2004-04-09 01:34 PM



Be Happy!

Will there be a day where I'm happy?
From the day you left, I've been a victim to the sappy,
You know what I mean, the strong ones not the crappy,
From cigarettes to marihuana, oh God it's so nappy,
But (edit) it! -what do I have to loose?
Tell me baby, what can I do without you?
The hubble-bubble with the mates, that's just so crappy,
Boy, I'm getting lazy, and worse; I'm(edit)getting crazy!
For every single day without you, I'm going from bad to void,
My last wish before I die,
-is baby boy, you.... you, please allways be happy.


~~

{Profanity, even disguised by asterisks, are against the guidelines. Thank you for your undestanding and future compliance. Greeneyes~}


[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (04-09-2004 03:08 PM).]

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1 posted 2004-04-09 04:28 PM


Hi, and Welcome to Passions we are glad you have joined our circle of friends, and family….

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Kindly

Greeneyes~

~~**~~
The sound of silence calls,
I hear your voice and suddenly
I'm falling, lost in a dream
The echo of our souls meet
~~**~~

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The World of Poetry
2 posted 2004-04-10 06:26 PM


Nice poem. Welcome to Passions!
UnsilencedWords666
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Broken Memories & Falling Tears
3 posted 2004-04-13 05:46 PM


Welcome aboard...lol...thanxs for your comments on my work most def. appreciated! Cute poem...I think it's adorable how it rhymed...keep on writing! And post lots...

*~*nessa bear*~*

You can’t choose who you are Only what you will be Why can't you choose To let me be me...*~*Nessa Bear*~*

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